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Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2010 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

:::sigh::: Quite lovely.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2010 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've said this to other authors before.  There can never be enough first date fics.  Love the pregnancy reveal, the proposal, the wedding and the baby, but my favorite stories are those early moments, days and weeks following, "It's a date."  Such a triumphant turning point for our couple.  I never get tired of reading about it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2010 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1

gorgeous. please write again soon, kells!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back!  I'm so glad to see you're back in the saddle.  Here's hoping you stay inspired!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was really beautiful.  I would love to hear more from you soon!

Reviewer: pajammies Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

loved this. great style, and so much was accomplished in so little words! loved the part about the jinx, too.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is wonderful and the perfect amount of steamy. It's nice to see first date fics again. Well done. Hope you write more things soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back, kells.  For the record, I will never ever get tired of first-date/first-time fics. 

He was just as nervous, but he kept kissing her until it felt like he was drowning in her and his nerves were washed away.  Beautiful.   My kind of story.

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1

"His fingers trace a path....from the nape of her neck, slowly down her back to the swell of her bottom.  She's warm, and when he touches her she sighs quietly in her sleep.  He's still learning the little nuances about her, but it sounds like a happy sigh.  She sounds...yeah.  Happy."

I'm with jazzfan on this one...sweet and deliciously intimate!   Thanks kells

 

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1

i always enjoy a good first time story =D. who doesnt?

Reviewer: Monotreme Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2010 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Mmm, lovely!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2010 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mmmm can't be a nice first date fic

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2010 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy I decided to hit 'most recent' one more time before turning out the lights.

Retro JAM is good JAM.

Thank you kells

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2010 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a captivating version of their first night, kells. I can see this kind of intimacy happening right away between these two. Very believeable and great steam. *grin*
My favorite part? This is hilarious and perfect at the same time: "and the feeling of bare skin on bare skin that elicits a moan from them both. He would call jinx if he was able to form a coherent sentence -"
Well done!

Author's Response: Well I know that *I* would have a hard time keeping my hands to myself if I were on a date with Jim Halpert, lol.  Thanks for the kind words, my friend.  

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2010 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yummy.  First date fic is just what we need to chase away the summer speculation blues.

Nicely done, kells!



Author's Response: Thanks girl!  :) 

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