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Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2010 10:59 pm Title: Knight in Rusted Armor

i always enjoy stories of jim saving pam =D well this was more pam taking care of jim ..but its the same XD

is the title from the book? i only know the title in spanish(el caballero de la armadura oxidada) i dont know if its the same in english

Author's Response: No, actually, I thought up the title by myself, but I didn't know there was a book! That's cool! Thanks for reading/sharing that with me!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2010 09:16 pm Title: Knight in Rusted Armor

Your Jim was AMAZINGLY in character - how you didn't have him go all "hiiiiyaaaaaaaaa" :)

I was so excited to see your name back on here!! Welcome homeeeee

Author's Response: LOL thanks :)

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2010 07:57 am Title: Knight in Rusted Armor

This is really really cute! I like that Jim isn't superman, you know? But he's still going to defend his girl. The Pam in karate thing is so funny - she kicked a kid in the nose - really great image. Super cute banter, and very much in character. Hope to see more stories from you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2010 07:23 am Title: Knight in Rusted Armor

I liked that you didn't take Jim OOC and make him into some macho ninja warrior who kicked the guy's ass. I can believe your Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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