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Reviewer: greenever123 Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good start for a new writer. I think you caught the high school age emotions well. Be careful with your spelling and re-read your work before posting (see last sentence). Are you going to continue? I think you should.

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