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Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2010 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Need chapter 2 of this asap! I've already reread it a billion times

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2010 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

absolutely perfect fluff! the way you use words is so original and so...delicious. :)

You got Jim needing saving in Febrility..now i think it should be Miss Pamela's turn! Something simple. You do simple SO WELL and i mean that in the best of all possible ways!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2010 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1

This is unbelievably fluffy, but I really enjoyed it. *wallows in nice, sweet fluff*

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2010 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn. And wow. And did I mention damn? This is so... intimate and sensual. The narrative is lovely and poetic. You've got a great way of showing a big picture with very few words, which is a real gift in writing.
So if the first chapter is all about different aspects of their sex life, how about one on the different ways they fight, perhaps? Or maybe how they react to certain things from the past? Whatever you come up with, I'm eager to read it.

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2010 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. You make everything you write sound just perfect and magical and real. So yes, I loved it. That's all.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Are you trying to kill meeeeeee? First an update AND then a new fic *bows down to you*

This was.... there are no words. I loved it. I loved the simplicity of it. The everyday things... just... wow!!! Cannot wait to read the next chapter. Feel free to you know, not stop at three ;)

Author's Response: Hey there, girly! Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1

This.is.perfect.

My boyfriend & I are currently in a weird patch, and this made me want to take him home and just..be, us again. Thank you for this--it means more than you know.

Author's Response: Woohoo, glad I could help. :) Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! You're back! This is so adorable and sweet! Looking forward to read more of your stories Kate. =)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: pam_beesly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely lovely. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! More Kate! This was so sensual and just beautiful. It's always lovely to get these little snapshots into that intimate sphere. (Does it sound less creepy if I say it like that? ;))

But I tell you the best bit - the part where you say there'll be more! Yay!

Author's Response: :) There definitely will be more. This was too fun to write. Is that creepy?

Reviewer: RomanCandle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Now that's a healthy sex life. And active. I wonder how they have time for anything else?

Author's Response: I know, there a little frisky in this story, aren't they?

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back! So glad that you have decided to bless up with another chapter of Two, as well as this new little moments stories.

Author's Response: Well, thank you. :) Thanks for the review, as always.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Squuueeeeeeeeeee!  An update and a new fic?!  Fantastic!  Really missed you, Kate.  This is delectable and sweet and funny and...just adorable.  The thought of two more chaps makes me swoon.  How about a slightly different spin on this--maybe from the POV of an outsider?  For instance, they may have thought they were unobserved at work, or at other moments.  Just trying to offer a little help (and, selfishly, in addition to my love of first date fic, I love voyeuristic fic) ;) 

Author's Response: Well, lady, I may have to have some fun with that in the next chapter. Thanks for the review! You're such a doll with all your encouragement. :)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2010 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Seriously, why am I always writing about them doing this? because it's your duty to society to please the smut-hounds. like me.

i really love this. sweet, spicy, naughty, wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks, FC! It's a fun duty to fulfill. ;)

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