Date: October 11, 2010 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Great, great job, bebitched. AU, I know, but perfectly in character IMHO. I especially loved: Back-to-school night arrives like an Acme anvil; and, “You had your epiphany, but I knew always.” I don't know what inspired you to bring Pam and Katy together as a couple, but, the way you've written them, it works...it really works.
Date: October 09, 2010 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was fantastic! I think I've read Katy/Pam stories before, but this was so fresh and original. (That didn't really make sense... I'm trying to say that I loved your approach to their romance!) This was really beautifully written, and I loved the way you incorporated the other office characters in such a fun, new, yet predictable way - all of them have the exact job you'd think they would. Please continue this, if you find the inspiration, I'd really love to read more! Great job!