9 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2010 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Every girl my age loved NKOTB when they were little girls. Alyssa Milano wasn't quite as universal among boys my age...for me and my friends, it was Kathy Ireland.
But what a charming story. Twenty years from now, little girls who love Justin Bieber will be writing fic about grown women looking back on their first preteen crush on him. The circle of life, I suppose...
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2010 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Firstly, Doogie Howser was my first TV crush too. I LOVED him. How dare Jim ;)
Secondly, before I get in to how awesome this was, I am soooo LMAO at your confession at the end LOL. Just the fact it was in front of your inlaws is what makes it so hilarious. I'm sorry for laughing ;)
Okay, so this was SO good. I love the banter between them, and how Jim mocks Pam for being an NKOTB fan, because you know she would have been lol.
Brilliant times infinity :)
Date: November 14, 2010 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yep, can definitely see preteen Pam being into New Kids on the Block. Can't really see Jim saying "OMG," but for some reason the packing peanuts thing makes sense.
Ummm... one objection, however. This promised me explicit sexual content, and unless "packing peanuts" is a euphemism I'm not aware of, this was lacking in it. I feel dirty smut is in order, please. The perverts demand it. I know it says this is completed, but more please. I'd like to know about Jim's embarassing adolescent fascinations. Let me guess, Alyssa Milano?
Author's Response: Haha, I actually just went in and edited the OMG thing - definitely should have read OH MY GOD, as Jim is not a pre-teen valley girl. My bad. I figured the implied bangin' was subject enough for explicit content... But just for you, I could be talked into making this a 2 shot, the 2nd half being smutty Jim discussing his love for Alyssa haha
Thanks for the review!