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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2018 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

IDC that this is over ten years old. Aye aye aye...

Reviewer: anon again Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1

i came back for more ;-). you are seriously amazing! this line cracked me up: 

“I think those are your pens.” 

“Great.  Thanks.”

 

 

hahahahha! love it. i love that i can actually see this happening. were there actually to be smut on tv of course...  

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2006 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved this. "He’s the best thing you’ve had all day." - great line.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Who needs food when you've got Jim?

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my heavens, what a wonderfully hot and sexy and sweet story.  Wow. I love the line about seeing stars bright enough to light up the room.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you.  I was really happy with that part.  These two are quite powerful when they are together:) 

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn fine SupplyClosetSmut, bitterpill!  I love your second person take on this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I really appreciate it:)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

So much fun to read--wonderfully hot & cute. Loved the line towards the beginning about planting a tree.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I like that line, too.  Happy JAM!

Reviewer: justjaded Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guh. Just...guhhhhhh

I'm thinking I need a supply closet in my house...yes I definitely think so.



Author's Response: HA!  Don't we all!  Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, so lovely! There are so many wonderful things about this, besides the obvious hotness of course! For some reason I just loved this line You make more copies than you need to and silently vow to plant a tree in the backyard when you buy your first home together. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yes, Pam's guilt for wasting paper leads her to daydream about domesticity with Jim.  Who can blame her???

Reviewer: girl7 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

WOw.  This is just....amazing.  Just amazing.  Wow.  That's all I can say: wow. Love tease!Jim....

Author's Response:

You are so sweet!  Thank you!  I love that Jim as well.  Sigh.

Reviewer: Leely Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1

“I think those are your pens.” 

“Great.  Thanks.”

Yeah.  Funny in the middle of very hot = one of the best things ever.

Long live Supply Closet Day!



Author's Response: It really should be a national holiday.  Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1

This was way, way hot. And so well written - love the rhythm of the language and how you use 'He has that effect on you' as a coda. 'I like it when you're loud'? Coming from Jim, that line is scorching. Ah, sometimes it's the simplest things...

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Who knew a supply closet could cause all of this fic?  Amazing.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

This was lovely bitterpill.  Sweet and sexy at the same time - my absolute favorite combo.  Just lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Loved your take on that famous closet.  I appreciate the review:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Loved your take on that famous closet.  I appreciate the review:)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Writing this story in the second person was so effective.  Wow.  Very hot.


Author's Response: Thanks very much!  I appreciate it:)

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Your head is tucked into his neck and you stick out your tongue to taste him.  He’s the best thing you’ve had all day.

 

Yum. 



Author's Response: Yum, indeed.  Sounds like a great new diet.  Thanks for reviewing:)

Reviewer: travelingviolet Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Gosh, there's just something about that fan fiction supply closet. This was great, bitterpill.

Author's Response: Thank you so much:)  It is quite a powerful room, isn't it?

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

There will never be enough supply closet smut out there.

Wonderful and in-character and just so... Pam and Jim.

Great job!

 



Author's Response: Aw, thank you!  If only we could get this show on HBO:)

Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahem, yeah...the fact that you didn't use names....this fic had an effect on me, lol! So incredibly hot!

Author's Response: HA!  Well, I'm very glad you enjoyed it:)  Thanks!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh. My.  LOVE how you used the first-person & no names in this.  Totally hot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I may have to avoid names all the time now:)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2006 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Best. Last. Line. Ever! Wow! This is like supply closet smut day. My new favorite day of the year.

Now if I can only I can find a way to get on-Jim's-desk day or in-the-elevator day established.



Author's Response: Hmmm....yes, we'll have to work on that:)  Thank you so much!

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