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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2018 09:35 pm Title: Firework

Whew! That was a good one! It almost (just almost) makes me want to go for a run! Very nice.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2011 02:41 pm Title: Firework

Makes me want to go running! Nice back story to the shower comment from the episode.

The Chateau Marmont and Pam's irritation at the beginning had me chuckling. The rest was just ... Hot! Hot! Hot! ... said to the rhythm of the Oh! Oh! Oh! of the song ;-)

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Firework

I just love this story so much. :)

Reviewer: bottl4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 08:45 pm Title: Firework

Short but utterly fantastic.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 07:54 pm Title: Firework

You know, this song was on 4 different radio stations at the same time today. I'm actually a fan of it and of some of Katy Perry's songs, but it's being overplayed for sure.

Anyways, on to an actual review - This is so cute, sweet and omg so hot. I really love everything about it, love their passion and fire for one another.

I'm not sure of any other way to create a series other than go to create series, and copy and paste your chapters within that series. I'm pretty sure they'll show up all as new one shots with the series title and a new read count/review count. Since I'm not a mod, I don't know for sure but I think that's at least one way to do it if you wanted to make it a series. Hope that was helpful.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 07:36 pm Title: Firework

I will say, I am in no way ashamed to confess my affection for Katy Perry songs. So I happily hummed away while reading this amazing story. Thanks for the soundtrack.

Umm, this story is blazingly HOT! Jim as a runner was awesome. I may have made a wish that I was lagging behind watching him run in black shorts. Yum. And whiny, exhausted, running Pam was so amusing! And when they returned to thier house and Jim licked the sweat off his wife's neck, I think I died.

And I do think this would've worked nicely into NIGHT, but seriously, Ivy, I'm happy to read whatever you write, however you decide to post. I just get super happy whenever your name is at the top of Most Recent. So if you want to post thirty stories in a series, I'll happily read each one. Or, if you prefer to post thirty chapters in a story, I'm excited to read that also. So, the moral of this, just keep writing and I'm happy to read whatever you decide to allow us to read.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 06:57 pm Title: Firework

Your writing is greatly have no idea.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 05:27 pm Title: Firework

Hey, you! Well isn't this a welcome surprise at the end of a long day?! Their just going for it so spontaneously despite being exhausted and sweaty is quite erotic IMHO. I'd say shower sex with Jim Halpert would be enough to make any girl forget her vanity ;). Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 05:19 pm Title: Firework

I believe you may have actually killed me.

1. I have missed your writing so freaking much, it is unreal.
2. I find it incredibly sexy that Jim is a good runner, just imagining him in those black shorts mmm :)
3. The line about the Chateu Marmont cracked me the eff up. I'm cyber high fiving you right now.
4. Jim's TWSS leading in to hot WELL WRITTEN AWESOME SMUT? Fan-freaking-tastic!!!!!!
5. The way you manage to write dirty, but keep it classy, maybe that isn't the right word, but , you wwrite high quality smut, that's what I'm trying to say ;)
6. Thanks, now Firework is in my head.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 05:12 pm Title: Firework

good lord, that was so wonderfully filthy.

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