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Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2016 01:45 am Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

Somehow, this was just adorable.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2011 08:28 am Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

Terrific! I'm going to have to read the whole series now! :)

I loved how you were able to work in both their POV's, and how similar they were. And that he hasn't called her "girlfriend" to her face yet. And that the sex was spontaneous. (Though I fought with myself not to worry about the spilled paint!) Great story!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2011 08:16 am Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

Such a pleasure to read this again and add it to my favorites :)

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2011 12:06 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

Formatting huh? Didn't notice any issues.

Loved how you made the first so spontaneous and playful and yet still intense.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 11:14 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

ahhhh THERE we go! i love this one... so sweet and funny and sexy and THEM.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 10:14 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

I love the, we are very purple comment, cute moment in all the sexiness :)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2011 08:49 pm Title: Lay, Lady, Lady

what? it stops mid-story. mid-sentence, actually.

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. There was some formatting error that kept screwing with me. All fixed now.

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