Date: May 15, 2011 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooh, great colab :) I loved the idea of Jordan crishing on Jim. I wish they'd kept that in.But reading this was as good. The way they both try and out-do each other is so like them. That was hot and hilarious.
Date: May 15, 2011 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Great collaboration, ladies :) I like their back and forth, and thought it was different for them to be so bold at work with the blouse unbuttoning and the ice pop. The F word threw me just a bit but all in all I thought this was really good. Hope you'll do more writing together in the future!
Date: May 14, 2011 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
That is just obscene in an awesome way. Nicely done. :) I'm glad you put an end to this Jordan business, I know that nothing would ever happen, but you know how people speculate. Great chapter, and I'd love to see some more!
P.S. I love that you co-wrote this, I miss having collaborating authors! I find that the co-authored stories are always a bit better, as two brains can come up with better material, and for that matter, better jokes and pranks! Thanks for sharing. :)