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Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2011 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is too funny. Jim is so oblivious. Poor Jordan doesn't stand a chance... Get out while you can, girlie!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am definitely smiling and satisfied. Very cute! I hope the show writers can do something along these lines.

Reviewer: Labhub Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved it, especially the way Jim had no clue Jordan was flirting with him. Maybe the writers on the show will follow up with this-it would be fun to watch

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooooooh, great colab :) I loved the idea of Jordan crishing on Jim. I wish they'd kept that in.But reading this was as good. The way they both try and out-do each other is so like them. That was hot and hilarious.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Great collaboration, ladies :) I like their back and forth, and thought it was different for them to be so bold at work with the blouse unbuttoning and the ice pop. The F word threw me just a bit but all in all I thought this was really good. Hope you'll do more writing together in the future!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Ladies, that was awesome. Left me satisfied and smiling.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Cheers and applause for you!

That was hilarious! I'm glad it was fun for you, maybe you'll do it again...

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2011 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

That is just obscene in an awesome way. Nicely done. :) I'm glad you put an end to this Jordan business, I know that nothing would ever happen, but you know how people speculate. Great chapter, and I'd love to see some more!

P.S. I love that you co-wrote this, I miss having collaborating authors! I find that the co-authored stories are always a bit better, as two brains can come up with better material, and for that matter, better jokes and pranks! Thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2011 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you ladies for that little treat. Of course Pam has nothing to worry about. It was very cute how they choose to show each other.

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