Date: June 23, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! Did you hear that? You must have since, if I recall correctly, you don't live all that far from me: D My heart's going pitter pat, too =) Perfectly in character. I could envision this so clearly. More more more!
Date: June 19, 2011 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
His insisting that he follows her home, after all they've gone through during that time period, speaks volumes of how much he cares about her. Love this little "bridge" as you called it, and can't wait for the next update!
Date: June 18, 2011 05:03 am Title: Chapter 3
S3 parking lot tension you could cut with Dwight's machete...I'm hooked. You've captured their conflicting emotions and the mood so succinctly - just what it takes to build this sort of taut momentum. Looking forward to the charming third...thanks for this, babe :)
Date: June 17, 2011 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Argh! The anxiety I feel! The comment about he used to tell himself if he ever had even just "one chance to be with Pam" he'd grab it, well, it gave me great hope that Jim might be willing to risk it.
Risk it, Jim! In the parking lot of Chapter 4 please!
Date: June 17, 2011 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like this line: "The desperation of clinging to someone that you weren’t even sure you wanted, simply to keep from drowning in the pain of missing someone else" Well put. And him trying to resist this seems spot on. Very nice body language descriptions. More, please.
Date: June 17, 2011 06:31 am Title: Chapter 2
She misses having that, having that person who loves you and wants to keep you safe. She knows that she can be safe, can be okay, without it, but it doesn’t fill the void nonetheless.
I love this line. I've felt this way many times in my life and that's just a perfect way to describe it.
Date: June 16, 2011 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love fic set during this timeframe. The angst and the anticipation is wonderful. I love waiting for the moment they both realize they are on the same page. I'm really enjoying this and the fast updates really add to how much I am liking it.
Date: June 16, 2011 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
The tension is very much there, I could see it all happening. I liked this a lot and look forward to the next chapter! Will they be able to mend fences on this particular night? Or is the pain too much for them to move past it. I hope we get to find out soon!