Date: September 01, 2011 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, this is certainly not what I expected, but wow, that was steamy for sure! I know you said you reposted these first chapters but I never read this before, and I'm glad you brought it back! I love how happy they are and how giddy Pam is about the baby. Just one small ittsy bitsy thing that, for me, makes me a little nutty - I would ease up on the "Beesly" and "Baby" name calling. Too much, in my opinion, can be just a little too much. Other than that though, I'm really excited about upcoming chapters!
Date: August 31, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This. This melted me.
“Just be sure, ok? You’re housing some pretty precious cargo, I want to make sure you’re perfect.”
Guh,I can see him doing it.
But,I have to tell you this, because it made me laugh.I got to the part where you sayd she was at the gynecologist office, having her annual exam. Iread it and was like, wtf??? in my head I so read that as anal exam, whch makes no sense, but it made me stop and laugh for a while *has no shame*
Loving this, so glad you're writing, I heart your stories.