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Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2007 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Wow. I like this. I mean I really, really, really, really like this. Please keep it up. Please? LOL Now I'm going to just be dying to know how it turns out.

Reviewer: kellybaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2006 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Wow...wow...wow. Very nice. Never would have thought of this. Is it going to end up a bit of a crossover, because that could be fun.
I'd really like to see more of this.

Reviewer: Verity Kindle Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2006 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Sweet Buddha on a cracker, this is awesome. I feel like I'm right there with them, watching the government build cells for mutants. WOW. Please, update soon. This is crazy good. 

Reviewer: twentythree Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2006 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

You know what's funny? I watched CasinoNight today and I totally just freaked out when I realized that the whole telekinetic thing Jim has is probably from the trick he pulls with Pam. Or the inspiration for it, I mean. Even if not, I thought that was a cool way to put it in. I am so waiting for the rest of the story, this is AMAZING. So well done. Keep it up, please!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Another great chapter. Having Dwight be on their side was heartwarming.

Reviewer: Rose Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

I admit I was skeptical, but you totally won me over to the idea. This is facinating. I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: MrsKamorri Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

I am really, really enjoying this. I am not a huge X-men fan but I like the movies that I have seen. So, is Dwight going to end up one of "them" too or just an ally?
Also, about 3/4 of the way down Pam leaves Mark to "complicate" the power of pastries. Did you mean "contemplate?" Although, as written, it makes me chuckle. Like he has some sort of super power. Don't mind me- I spend all day with preschoolers :D

Reviewer: Peskipiksi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Okay, this just keeps getting better with every chapter.  I'm on pins and needles to know what comes next.  Are they betrayed by a friend?  Do they go on the run together?  Is Dwight a mutant too?  Can't wait!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2006 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

I like the parallel of Pam and Jim sharing something that nobody else understands. And of course, I love the X Men movies so bravo!

Reviewer: kathrynann Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

I just discovered this and I love it! I'm pretty much a huge geek about stuff like X-Men so this combination is making me very happy.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Another great chapter.  This is so interesting and different.  Wonderful job!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

Ok, umm...I really love this.  I'm all for x-overs, but I wasn't sure this one was gonna work, but it does...really well.  I wasn't sure on which side Dwight was gonna come down - I could see either.  (I'm still not convinced he won't rat them out, but them I'm also concerned about Mark - just suspicious I guess.)  When I say I am looking forward to the next part, please take it as a compliment and not as unbearable pressure to write faster...because quality counts. : )  Thanks for the hard work.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

The last 2 lines were so sweet.  I'm afraid Roy will find out and when he learns that she is staying at Jim's he will report them. 

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

This is so much fun to read!  You're mixing the 2 worlds really well...can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

I'm enjoying this fic.  :)  Yay Mark!

Reviewer: dunny Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

When I read the summary, I honestly didn't think this could work, but now I'm hooked. You've done a great job blending the two worlds, and also with alternating between Jim and Pam enjoying their powers (and each other!) and dealing with the Registration Act.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3: Pam's Wish

So Gina knows about Pam?  Gina sounds scary.  ;-)

I like having Dwight on their side.  Good stuff! 

Reviewer: monkeychristian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Write more!!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

This is an interesting setup.  I really like the idea, and will be looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

Funny how Jim told his family and Mark, but Pam never did. At least she has Jim now to shoulder her through the act...and vice versa, of course.

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

Wow. This rocks. Incredibly unique. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

Great chapter!  Bye bye, Roy...nice touch.  I'm really enjoying this:)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Ah, this is so good!  Very creative!  Really well done:)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

There was so much I liked about this chapter, but this line from when Jim was younger really stood out to me - "That's when Jim learned sometimes it was better to lie when the truth just wasn't what the other person wanted to hear."  

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 09:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Hope

yay - already broken up with roy? I like the way you think!

keep going please!! 

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