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Reviewer: lovingthursdays Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2012 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for finishing this compelling story. I thought your ending was perfect, considering that the father is still struggling to admit he was wrong. So good to see Jim and Pam and Cece and Phillip (and their grandmothers)so settled in.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2012 06:25 pm Title: Epilogue

Perfect end for a perfect story :)

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2012 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Really missing this tons! Hoping very much to read more soon! Hope all is well with you!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2012 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 18

I love this so much! I feel so sad for Pam and Adele, and I hope they'll be able to patch things up. I'm so sad that it's almost over. I hope that you'll have something new for us as soon as you're done with the epilogue.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 09:29 am Title: Chapter 18

Ahhhhh I'm so sad this is almost over. This has been such a pleasure to read. You tell such wonderful stories and create situations that have us al sitting on the edge of our seats. I can't wait for the epilogue, but I hope you're already planning another story :p

Reviewer: TaioraWarrior Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2012 02:13 am Title: Chapter 18

Ah, peace. Looking forward to epilogue.

Reviewer: more_awake Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2012 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 18

I was so excited to see this updated! ... But also sad that it's almost over. I loved their interactions in this chapter, particularly Jim being so supportive of Pam. And then the image of Jim and Cece napping together was completely adorable. Thank you for the update! I look forward to seeing what happens to them in the epilogue :)

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 17

You are in danger of falling off the "recently updated" page. Oh, and I really want to read an update!! Hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Definitely still here, sorry it took so long to read this. When I saw you updated I ran out of time to read and haven't been able to get back here since I updated my story. Anyway, I really liked this chapter a lot. The chat with Adele and Pam was so heart breaking, I really feel for Adele, and I wonder what will happen with her and her husband. And Betsy's aware of what her husband has done, I like that she's not faulting Jim for this entire thing. I'm really looking forward to Jim and Pam reconnecting, and everything else you have in store for us with this great story (that I've been completely addicted to, btw) So hurry and post an update soon! :)

Reviewer: more_awake Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2012 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 17

Sorry that I'm so late in commenting! I was SO excited when I saw an update to this, and as usual, you did not disappoint. I felt the tension in the first part where everything was finally revealed and the sadness when Pam finally talked to Adele one-on-one. The last scene with Jim and his mom was also well done. I'm reeeally looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks for the update. I'm definitely still interested :)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2012 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 17

If you think I'd be scared off by a little writing hiatus from you, you have another thing coming! I am here, at the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting the next chapter of this superb story!

Ugh, I mean, I have to know what will happen next... I hope you don't go away that long again... I need more, and soon too!!

Please and Thank you!

Reviewer: rahenson1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2012 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

Still reading. Been wondering how the story would continue. I liked the pacing here. Still not rushing further than the characters would go. I must admit I've been popping on now and again to see if there was an update. Glad I stopped in tonight :)

Reviewer: TaioraWarrior Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2012 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 17

I'm still out here :). I'm glad its finally out there. Now all thats left is the gushy part where Jim and Pam get back together. Yay!

Reviewer: Pyrofanity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2012 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

I was so glad to see a new chapter of this story put up. I had to go back and read the previous chapter but as soon as I did the plot came rushing back to me. This was a great chapter and I am definitely looking forward to more soon.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2012 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes, we're still here! I check this page a few ties a day hoping for an update. :). I was thinking about leaving a message saying the 30 days was coming up and your great story was in danger of falling off this "recent updates" page. But I have bugged you for updates before and it kind of feels rude...

Great chapter! I'm glad Roy left right away and that Pam had a chance to tell the real story. And now Pam and Jim can have the evening together to bond with cece and can really talk without worrying about the time.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2012 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 17

Hell yes we're still out here. I have been refreshing the front page an unhealthy amount checking to see if this had been updated. Firstly,and this is so random, but whenever I read the name Adele, I picture Roy's mom with a beehive type hairstyle, like the singer lol.
I really feel sorry for Adele though. What Joe and Roy asked Pam to do was wrong, but their heart was in the right place, and she's just so in love with that little girl that it breaks my heart. I'm happy the truth came out though. Everyone needed to know that, that little pudding cup belonged to Jim. I can't wait to see them work on being a family and stuff. God, this fic makes me all tingly :p
Welcome back, now don't leave us for so long again ;) (I really can't talk lmao)

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

ACK DEEEE..... have you gotten lost somehow on your way back to us? Forgotten where we are? Do you have amnesia and can't remember us? Well I for one am praying that WHATEVER it is, you're able to deal with it and quickly because WE need you back.. *I* need you back... DESPERATELY!!! I need to knpw what's going on! Now I know you are now a famous screenwriter having written the major points of The Vow for them (anyone who is puzzled about what I am talking about needs to check out Dedeen's AWESOME story Learning to Love Again and then check out the trailor for the new movie The Vow! I swear the main points were written for them years ago by De. PLUS it's an absolutely FABULOUS story... it's the one that drew me into fabfiction and wouldn't let me go! ANYHOW..... PLEASE DEEEE.... I NEED to know whats happening! Seriously.... NEED!!! You wouldn't just strand me like this, would you????

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2012 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1

WHERE are you? I NEED a fix of you and this story in the very worst way! You've left us hanging for about three weeks here now and that is just not like you. I really REALLY hope everything's okay! It beter not be that Sally brought you that pizza and you girls have been just talking all this time because you each have fics that we are just dying for the next chapters of! Seriously though... I am SO dying to know how all this sorts out with Pam, Jim, (Sweet Cece of course) Evil Roy, Adele and Betsy ALL being there as this confontation is taking place! PLEASE DEEEEEE.... save us! We NEED to know and we just plain ole miss you! Hope all is fine! *hugs* T~

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Please and thank you :)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh my! This is amazing and really I am completely on the edge of my seat as I await whatever you have planned for them next! I have so many questions, but I don't want you to spend time that you could use writing the next chapter!! Go! Write! Go!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 16

HOMYGOD!! WOW!

MORE PLEASE!!!

::collects jaw from floor and leaves work for the day::

WOW!!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 15

Side note, every time I see the title of this story, the Adele song pops in my head. Just thought you'd want to know that lol
Anyway, I'm really so disliking Roy and his protectiveness. But at the same time it seems like the exact thing he'd do. The image of Jim cradling his daughter at the end was so lovely, I am all a gooey pile of mush now. I love every thing this chapter is. I am so proud of Pam for being so strong and standing up to Roy. And I love again how easily Pam and Jim are getting along again.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 14

Omigosh, I loved this chapter so much. Roy's adding such tension that's making my toes bunch. I love them having breakfast together and the ease of how they're getting back to where they should be. But man, Roy is surely getting on my nerves and making me anxious!

Sorry it's been a while since I've been around this archive, it's been a rough month for me but I'm trying to get back on track now. I'm so excited that I get to press that next button, but I'm also sorry that I've been so delayed in staying caught up with this story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2012 06:31 am Title: Chapter 16

Dedeen, I'm so happy you're back...and you brought the angst with you!  Wow--what a showdown!  I'm already dying for another update.  /selfish

Reviewer: Pyrofanity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 16

I was so glad to see a new chapter of this go up. It's been really slow on here lately as far as new fic goes so anything new is welcome.

I have been following this story since the start and it is really great. It's such a different and fresh take on the Jim Pam story.

Keep the new stuff coming!

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