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Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2012 01:24 pm Title: guilty feelings, angry thoughts

I really liked this, I'm looking forward to these moments between them, so I hope you'll post more soon.
Small suggestion - I'd put the inner monologue italics on a separate line so they stand out more.
Enjoyable, looking forward to more.

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