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Reviewer: lesser Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is lovely. It's SO great to have new, good pieces posted. Much appreciated!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, lesser. I really appreciate hearing from you, thanks for the lovely review! :) hope to hear from you again soon!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

You know what's perfect? This fic!!! I now have the biggest smile on my face. They're so dreamy, and as you know, because I have told you a bazillion times, you write them so in character, god *re reads*

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I really appreciate that so much! I wrote these a long time ago, so I'm glad they're still enjoyable! :) x

Reviewer: SwampyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!! I want to write an eloquent review, but the sight of all the new stories on the homepage has left me speechless. This was awesome. Thank you for posting it! I've probably mentioned a time or three, that I just LOVE your Jim. Let me just say it again. Love him.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review, and I'm happy to know you're enjoying all of the new stories. And I'm really happy to see that you like the way I write Jim. That's really important to me to get down right, so thanks for that! Hope to hear from you again! :)

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2012 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I know it's cruel but I love it when they get insecure about each other because then inside my head, I get all smug and go "she looooooves you"...I'm a 12 yr old in my head incase you couldn't guess...

Very sweet and very good, it fits the perfect explanation as to why and when he bought the house, when Pam started to feel unsure about it and the thoughts that festered away in his (beautiful) head. Lovely :D

Author's Response: HAH! I think we'd get along really well if we ever met in person, I have the same mindset too. I tease my sister about her boyfriend all the time like a 12 year old lol And yes, he sure does have a beautiful head, doesn't he? I thought that even with a solid relationship that they have, he'd still have these thoughts. I thought that going with that thought, way back when I wrote this, fit in with his expression when she called him up, crying on the bench that she'd failed and had to stay and retake it. The expression on his face looked like he was scared of losing her at that moment.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you decided to write new stories! Thanks for feeding our addiction!

I love how you portrayed Jim's insecurity. I am so glad that Jim knew he was being irrational, so he worked it out by talking it through with his parents and not dragging Pam into it.

Great story.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! I thought better of having Jim voice his concerns to Pam. I think even if sometimes people make mistakes, that wouldn't be a mistake Jim would make. Thanks for the feedback, it really means a lot. :)

Reviewer: Pyrofanity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2012 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed it. It's really great to see these new stories going up. I love these stand alone and one shot type stories about little moments when Pam and Jim are together but not yet married. Its just nice to have a peek into their dating life. Keep em coming!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! We do have a few others in the works so stick with us! Thanks for the supportive feedback :)

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