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Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2012 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Sorry I'm so behind but I still love this! Mostly because it perfectly captures how a man can fall in love, have his heart broken and desperately try to move on only to fail miserably (and realise said love interest is the love of his life) all in the space of an eight hour workday. Oh unrequited love, it's such a delicious thing to write and/or read about! Can't wait for the Pam version :)

Reviewer: TaioraWarrior Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVED THIS SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! To many complements on the little details to mention. Loved the structure, sticking with the cannon, all of it. Particularly it only taking him like seven hours to fall in love. And YES, do Pam's POV! Please and thanx, I'll be looking for it. :)

Reviewer: lovingthursdays Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Jim. I think you described their first day perfectly. Your ability to crawl under their their skin and know them so well is amazing. Thank you for this!

Reviewer: OfficeLady Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2012 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story -- poor Jim -- he's "screwed, and not in a good way." I think that what you wrote is exactly what happened on that first day. :-)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2012 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1

YES, definitely want to read this from Pam's POV.I was reading this, thinking, don't worryJim, YOU GET HER IN THE END lol.It was such a refreshing idea. As much as I LOVE first date fics, it was cute to see this side of their "first time" you know? God, you're truly amazeballs x

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