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Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww! I love angst but, god, there are so many moments where things could have been completely different if they'd just done a tiny thing differently!

Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2018 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is lovely! That image at the very end was great. Something about the simple statement that he took a breath before unbuckling was so telling in a small wonderful way. Great piece

Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: dwangela Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2018 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1

How did you manage to capture all of the angst and longing in 800 words? This story was amazing. The almost minimalistic style worked perfectly, and your lack of description allowed me to see everything that was happening in my head.

Author's Response: Thanks so much <3

Reviewer: Clover Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think this is the third time I read this one. Each time I read it, I am so carried away with thinking about what happens next that I forget about leaving a review! So let me get out of the parking lot long enough to tell you I love this. Such a small twist could have made such a difference. Ahhhh.

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving the parking lot to leave this :-)

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I really love this! I wish there were more people out there still writing quality jam fic like this one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate knowing someone is still reading and reviewing stuff around here!

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