Date: October 12, 2018 03:56 pm Title: Moon bounce
Lovely! Great episode for JAM to get a little closer. I love how they start their conversation, a nice mixture of tentative and comfortable. Michael’s antics are a safe topic for them so that was great to make them comfortable. And Big Brave Beesly was so brave in a very a way. Lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Date: September 03, 2018 07:47 pm Title: Moon bounce
Romantic and a little silly is my favorite kind of story and this hit both of those notes (with just a shadow of angst to balance it out). This fic was recommended and I’m so glad I read it!
Author's Response: Iím so glad, too! Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review, and to whoever recommended my story to you! PS, I love your user name :-)
Date: June 20, 2016 12:51 pm Title: Moon bounce
There was something a romantic about that bouncy castle wasn't there? Really like this, it's an extremely optimistic version of this time on the show but I could also see it happening, since at this point Pam was working on her courage and Jim's guards were let down a little by the end of the day. Cute, sexy and in-character, gold star!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for this excellent and thoughtful review! I'm glad you ultimately liked it--I always felt like the teeny connection Jim and Pam make when they figure out that Michael is planning to jump was so perfect and tiny and subtle that I thought, hey, I'm gonna shine a huge spotlight on it :-) (and by "huge spotlight," I of course mean "write a fanfic years after the episode aired/people stopped ravenously reading JAM fic")
Date: May 04, 2015 12:40 am Title: Moon bounce
So great! Recent jam fic is usually lacking in quality, this is not! You write Jim and Pam really well! I hope you'll post more here and at fanfiction.net
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :-)