Reviews For Out of the Fog
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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2019 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice and very sexy. Cute ending, too!

Reviewer: Candi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2017 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Very sexy. I loved it.

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2017 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you found us and posted this great story! I think you had just the right amount of story/plot, loved the dynamic you set up between Jim and his friends (something sorely lacking from the show). And then the sexy parts were 🔥🔥🔥, dang! I think you wrote Pam well, giving her some new found confidence (and having Jim help draw that confidence out of her as he always did) but also having her deal with that ever-present streak of self-doubt and shyness that she has.

Hope to read more from you soon!

Reviewer: idleutopia Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2017 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I adored this! It's so right. Pam had to have a moment of doubt, how could she not. Yes, she made the decision to leave Roy herself but to jump into something with someone so soon (even if that someone is Jim) would require a moment of hesitation, just to look at the paths ahead.

Jim has had years to think and to settle on the idea of Pam and him together. On the other hand, for Pam, this is all new. She was in denial about what Jim truly meant to her.

Anyways, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2017 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nicely structured, very passionate!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Im glad you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2017 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was just flat well-written. damn!! How am I going to win the Valentine challenge? Don't even get me started about Msteapot. That chick, like you can WRITE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and your kind words. I'm just doing my best here. And I totally ageee about msteapot, she has a way with words. Thanks again

Reviewer: msteapot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was such a beautiful story. My heart leapt and fell and everything in between. I hope you continue writing other stories!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I wanted it to feel sort of up and down and high and low. I really appreciate your reading it. BTW I love your Voicemails fic. It's awesome 

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm pretty new to this site too!
So glad I took the time to read this; I'm blushing haha! Dear lord that was some fabulous smut... It had just the right amount of detail!
I thoroughly enjoyed this and hope you write more in the future!

Author's Response: Thanks so much I was worried about the detailing but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Im working on two new ones now. Please keep reading!

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