Date: March 07, 2017 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story works well because Jim has to realize he has become Roy. It seems the similarities between the two situations are not lost on the couple and they manage to work things out for the better. Nicely done!
Date: February 25, 2017 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I thought it was very touching, and your writing style flowed very well! I hope Pam has learned her lesson and really appreciates Jim this time around.
Author's Response: Thanks, but we will see! She's a bit self-centered!
Date: February 23, 2017 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, but man Jim really came off as a loser. Gets dumped and then crawls back on Valentine's Day to talk about his feelings!
Great job though looking forward to your other work.
Author's Response:
I agree. Jim has always wimped out when it comes to Pam. At least he set down some rules. Will Pam stick to them? Will Jim be a man if she doesn't? Stay tuned!
Date: February 23, 2017 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I love that Pam and Jim can overcome their troubles and end up together. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
But have they? Is Pam a little too quick to agree to Jim's rules? She likes attention. Can Jim provide enough?