Date: March 09, 2017 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Shutterbug, this was a pleasure to read. It painted a clear picture of a happy, messy, loving family. "Even as he formed the words, his mind flashed a different image: Pam pinned to the wall, his mouth slanted over hers, her skin stamped with color--a trail of where he'd touched her." Sweet and sexy. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! What lovely feedback! I really enjoy writing "moments," little snapshots of their lives, whether they're ordinary or extraordinary moments. It's a lot of fun. Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!