Date: March 26, 2017 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi Moogie Man! Just realized I forgot to vote but you assumed correctly -- Pam tells the truth. Thanks for your compliment by the way
Author's Response: You not only have a talent for writing but you seem to have a caring heart. Keep writing and your sincereness can balance out my cynicism. Don't give up on me!
Date: March 25, 2017 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Moogie Man! I was surprised to read Jim as so vulgar and aggressive — I don’t really see that in his character (I don’t think his jealousy is of a violent nature). Also, surprised about Pam. I know you like to write the Pam/Jim relationship in a bit of a struggling state, but I think the love between the two is very real.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. your opinion means a lot I assume you are voting for pam to tell the truth. I still have to write the ending after the votes are in. If pam is honest, I think you will see a loving ending. if the vote goes the other way, who knows. My challenge will be to write a believable ending, even if I don't like it. By the way. I thought you should have won the valentines contest. Back to my story, my son likes my story, my girls don't. Boy/girl thing.