1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2018 06:29 am Title: My heart was blinded by you
Lovely! That ending was just something. A real surprise but done in such an understated way. Very nice.
Date: May 10, 2017 06:10 pm Title: My heart was blinded by you
Great story! You wrote Pam really well in this. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with the whole Jim situation, and if she still marries Roy.
Author's Response:
Hi manidfk! There will definitely be some angst and tough times with Pam/Jim in the upcoming chapters, but I can promise a happy ending! Thanks for the review!
- msteapot
Date: May 09, 2017 11:02 pm Title: My heart was blinded by you
You're welcome! Yes I think it's really hard to write as Pam from season 1-4 because her feelings are left somewhat open to interpretation by the writers, meaning that you have to decide for yourself whether she knew she was in love with Jim by Casino Night or not (etc). That detail alone makes the whole reason behind her actions change and therefore the writing style too; the author has to make that clear in their fic, adding another layer of complexity! Well, that's what I think anyway... But I think your prose has Pam is great anyway!
I know she's a AU character, but I'd really love for more Lauren in this fic-- a reconciliation would be lovely or maybe she was even behind the reason Jim shows up?!
Really looking forward to the umm... fun times..! :)
Author's Response:
Hey alittlestitious2! I think you're right about Pam - she's an ambiguous character, especially in the early seasons. I never really thought about expanding on Lauren, but I love the idea! Hahaha, I'm excited to write fun times. Thanks for the review!
- msteapot