Date: March 07, 2018 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so sweet! I laughed out loud at the descriptions of Gabe. And you wrote their friendship in this episode so well. I love to see other pairings because there’s so much story to tell. Jim and Pam are great, obviously, but I love everyone else, too! I know you posted this story a while ago, but I wanted you to know that you have a reader in me and that I hope to see you around more soon!
Date: June 20, 2017 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story, very well-written. As shutterbug mentioned, Andy's dialogue is very believable and in line with how he acted on the show. We'd love to see more of your work here!
Date: June 18, 2017 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Really, really enjoyed it. This line made me giggle: "It would have been a great impression of Kevin, actually, if the circumstances had been different." And the British-accent Andy amused me, too (partly because it was very fitting for Andy). I generally don't care for "talking head" sections in fics, but this one was really cute, and the dialogue was show-worthy. All of the dialogue throughout the fic was show-worthy, honestly--spot-on. This is just lovely and polished and really enjoyable. Thank you so much for sharing. :)