Date: January 14, 2019 12:29 pm Title: Fallout
I have been reading this (technically re-reading) and not reviewing because I had a common comment: these are all great. I just wanted to stop in here and say that the transition among epistolary and non-epistolary chapters is very, very well done.
Date: June 01, 2018 04:36 pm Title: The Beginning
I love this glimpse into what Pam is thinking. And i love how you wrote Pam, so much more assured than she comes across but without pushing to to a level that becomes believable. I love how she incorporated things she wrote in the emails into the letter. I had an idea a few days ago to do something similar a la “Dear Mr Henshaw” but now I don’t know if I can because you did this so well! Great job.
Date: September 02, 2017 09:44 am Title: DUI
Oh. My. Gosh! This had EVERY element I LOVE about Jamfiction! Their voices are true. The story started, seamlessly adding backstory to the existing canon. Then it started to take little turns in a completely believable, delightful, imaginative way. And you brought it home with a flourish of joy! You hooked me big time! Just wonderful! Thank you. :)
Date: September 02, 2017 02:51 am Title: The Beginning
I love this one so much! And you should definitely write in this tone again because it really works. This last chapter had AMAZING dialogue in it between them, I have to say! I seriously can't wait to read whatever you're gonna post next :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always look forward to hearing from you.
Date: September 02, 2017 02:34 am Title: The Letter
This puts the whole of season 3 Pam into words:
But after how long I'd been with him (nine years… yikes), I needed time to find out who I was after the dust settled. I realize that time was the one thing you didn't have to give. And you know what? That's okay.