1 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2017 12:31 am Title: Chapter 13
Still loving this, can't wait for the next chapter! Also "poorly concealed love" is definitely the way to describe how Jim looked at Pam the first few seasons. 😄
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really enjoying writing it, hence the frantic update pace. And I think I have that facial expression of Jim's permanently burned into my mind, so I'm glad to know it came across in the writing.
1 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Now you have me imagining one of them stumbling onto MTT, that would be interesting 😆
Author's Response: I tried to avoid recognizable sites like even this one, but I agree it would. I think that's something like the premise of GodInThisChilis's Sky Blue and Black (to which I am obviously indebted).
Date: September 24, 2017 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm so excited :D
Author's Response: So am I :)
Date: September 24, 2017 07:56 am Title: Chapter 12
I am just loving this story!
Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear that. More to come soon (probably tomorrow, since I'm trying to stick to once/day).
Date: September 23, 2017 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
These last two chapters were so perfect. Both Jims and Pams thoughts and actions are spot on. I am loving how this story is progressing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. That means a lot to hear.
1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2017 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this chapter, Pam freaking out about seeing Jim in his "non-work-clothes" is very cute & very Pam and the banter is great. Looking forward to Jim's POV
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the Jim-chapters. I'm trying to catch the feel of their banter without going into too much detail because I know I'm not Greg Daniels & co., so it's good to hear it's working.
Date: September 23, 2017 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, yay! I'm so glad Pam has made this decision, and that's she's realized, Jim or no Jim, that Roy is just wrong for her. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I did not want to write much Roy, so I hope this was sufficient to at least give a taste of how I see that relationship (and why it was right to end).
Date: September 23, 2017 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
I didn't anticipate him finding out at the same time she did! Wow!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could provide at least a few surprises along the way (since I think we all know where this is going in the end...) :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2017 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
JAM! Yay for JAM! And yay for Pam reading about JAM. :)
Author's Response: That's how I feel, and that's why I wrote this!
1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2017 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. Keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I certainly will.
1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2017 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG! Pams Mom!! I was NOT expecting that! Do I like where this is going? Yes, yes I do!
I'm biting my nails as I read about them doing such mundane daily life activities. And I cannot wait for more :D
Ps. I just gave you all my jellybeans. I like this that much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate hearing that. I'm planning to stick to at least one update a day until I finish it, so there should not be a long wait for more. :)
Date: September 19, 2017 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
The plot development works great and the Jim and Pam interaction is believable. Good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I'm very glad to hear that, because I was worried it wouldn't read right. I hope I can continue to hit those marks.
1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2017 08:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Of course Dave did it *shakes fist at sky* Dave!
Love the Dwight & Pam interaction.
Author's Response: Such a Dave :). And thanks. For some reason Dwight seems easier to write than I expected. Not sure I want to ask myself why...
1 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2017 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a cool idea for a storyline, and I'm excited to see where it goes! Also beet jam? That is absolutely genius and absolutely Dwight-like! I really enjoy your writing style :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I really appreciate that. I thought of the beet jam on my way home from work and simply could not avoid putting it in right then (and distressingly, at least to me, it is actually a thing).
1 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2017 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this premise, can't wait to see where it goes
Author's Response: Thanks! I want to see too (not that I don't have a few ideas...)
Date: September 14, 2017 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I like this! Keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try, but they seem to jump into my head pretty much fully formed so I have no idea what I'll do if/when I get writers block with it.
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2017 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that's fun. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! This is the first time I've done something like this, so I appreciate you reading!