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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2023 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is exactly what I imagined it was like on the first day! Jim already so smitten. Pam did too but in denial because of her engagement.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2022 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I haven't had much time for new reads aside from drabbles and yes 55 words seems to be the magic number. I know this is old but I stumbled to it.

I know how hard it is to say more with less but you did a great job with a limited number of words to paint the picture of the sweetness of Jam.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2020 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very efficient use of 55 words to establish the pattern they'll spend the next three years in.

Author's Response: Thank you! 55 is hard!

Reviewer: HumAlong Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was beautiful, Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! It was fun to write.

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2017 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes 55 is the traditional number around here for challenges and such, and this is a lovely little addition, thanks for sharing! 💗

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I've been reading a lot of the archives and I wanted to get in on that 55-word action. 

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