1 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2023 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love the premise of this story and the execution is even better!
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2018 10:21 am Title: Chapter 3
I kind of keep a running list of Jamfic ideas that I would like to see written on my computer and this is actually one that I've been wanting to see. Love it so far, you writing is great and the story is compelling. You commented that you couldn't believe you were writing about Pam being in love with Roy yet I feel like you've captured Pam's mindset really well. I admit when I read it initially I thought "well Pam is in her early 20s by now, surely she's not still that enamored with Roy and with his high school glory days" but maybe that was the whole thing, when things were good with Roy it took Pam back to those carefree teenage days into her feeling lucky to have a football star choosing to be with her. Anyway it should be interesting especially with Pam's mom already very much on Jim's side of things. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 20, 2018 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your style of writing is so entrancing, and this story is no exception. I’m typically not a fan of hurt/comfort stories to be honest, but I’m ever so slightly addicted to your writing, so here we are. Wonderful so far, as always.
Date: February 20, 2018 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
STOP. STOP IT RIGHT NOW.
Actually, keep going. Forever, thanks. Can’t wait for the next update.
Date: February 20, 2018 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is so amazing. I'm at work so I can't go into the detail I'd love to, but you have so NAILED this! You so thoroughly, and yet simply capture Pam's point of view with amazing detail.
But for some reason, what riveted me the most was "Though her mother and father stood side by side, hands clasped like vice grips, the fingers on Helene Beesly’s left hand were clutched around a wrist she’d never seen before."
Somehow, this struck me hard as an extremely intimate and tender image. Pam's mom is not quite close enough to Jim to hold his hand, but she sure as heck is not going to let him go anywhere.
Okay, bring on the next chapter, PLEASE! :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2018 11:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Holy hell! You are killing me here... too many emotions going on right now.