Date: June 21, 2018 10:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Okay but like this whole chapter kind of made me teary eyed. It was so sweet and earnest and so so close to something big happening! I loved the flash cards, I loved Jim helping with the wedding planning (as hard as that must have been I’m sure he also loved it), I loved the inclusion of Larisa. This is quickly becoming one of my favorites because it’s just so believable and in character. Great great job.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks love :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2018 11:29 am Title: Chapter 9
I don’t know what’s more heartbreaking: Jim’s breakdown to Larisa or Jim helping Pam plan a wedding she thinks is to another guy.
Today’s theme: Roy can go kick rocks.
The flash cards! I’m dead. That was so adorable and I loved all of it. How many times has Stanley cheated? We truly do not know.
Who knew Jim could be so arts and crafty? I don’t hate it. I don’t hate it at all.
Author's Response:
*New idea: Roy kicks rocks in next chapter*... ;)
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one for sure.
1 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2018 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9
Awwwww. I'm here to encourage you to keep all 3 of these particular balls in the air somehow, because this is easily my favorite of your stories. It just keeps getting better. But how dare you take my Larisa-and-Pam-and-Jim-in-the-hospital theme and do it better ;)? Seriously, loving the Larisa/Penny inclusions in this story above all.
Author's Response:
I'm working on it just for you ;)
Don't even say that! Your Larisa and Pam are wonderful. We have two different styles going. Keep it up, yourself :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2018 04:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow. So yeah that was a chapter. Jim seems to have gotten his second wind here and it looks like it might be starting to pay off. Great way to end it with Jim's flashcard. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you!