Date: January 13, 2019 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
About time!!
I know, I know, you were building up and toying with ppl's amotions ans whatnot but I was just screaming for this to happen. :)
1 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2018 05:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow this story has a way of taking me on a roller coaster in every single chapter. I love the video; Jim would absolutely do this. The slow, methodical steps he takes are so practical for the story but touch all those sentimental parts.
In this chapter, I don’t think you could have written Roy’s emotions any clearer and it was perfect. Obviously he is conflicted on so many things, but man I felt that roller coaster he’s on because your writing is so wonderful.
Ohhhhh and more Sassy NY Penny please. 🙂 You’ve written her how I picture her (in my own head canon) and I am rooting for her feistiness to help Pam come around. Bravo!
1 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2018 12:28 am Title: Chapter 11
loving this! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Date: July 01, 2018 11:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved the video, loved the memory coming back, LOVED the air five! And then, as emotional as it was, I loved the whole series of events that lead to the revelation of when her memories cut out and how much time she’s lost. That is a tough scene to write and you did it so well and kept it in character. I feel awful for Jim and awful for Pam and even a little bit bad for old dummy Roy (but not too bad) and I’m excited to see what happens next, know that Pam knows how much she’s missing.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! It was tough to translate the picture in my head to words, but I'm glad it worked out in the end :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 06:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Everything you write is so good, ugh.
This is so wild, and I can't even imagine what it would feel like to be in a situation like Pam's. I have to know what happens next! Still, it was really cute seeing everyone from the office on tape like that, and the air high five! So good.
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, thank you! *blushes*
Date: June 28, 2018 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
Way to go, Roy. Ugh.
Oh dear, poor Pam! And just when she was starting to finally get somewhere remembering things on her own too.
Things I loved: the air five and the video, of course. Everyone behaved exactly as we’d expect them to in that video.
Jimbo’s gonna have some explaining to do, isn’t he?
Author's Response:
Why do I have, "Oh Lucyyyyyy you've got some 'splainin' to do?" going through my head now?
But yeah, lots of explaining and angst coming our way. But really, can you spell "Jam" without "angst" in the middle?
1 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2018 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Umm...wow. Well okay then. Yeah, that was kind of intense. Magnificent writing to be able to convey all those emotions. Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: June 28, 2018 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hoooooly moley. Good luck Pam. I hope she can forgive Jim (hopefully she remembers that he has actively been telling her there is time she doesn't remember, whereas Roy...). And good luck to Helene cleaning up this mess.
Author's Response: It's pretty much good luck to everyone at this point (including me, who has to write the next chapter...) xD