Date: August 22, 2020 07:06 pm Title: Paper
An interesting spin on this meeting - I feel like this moment is normally portrayed as a lot earlier than this. Makes more sense, really - a Pam who is just starting to grapple with her feelings towards Jim when the cameras arrive seems more likely to make some of the choices she did than a Pam who has been ignoring her feelings for almost as long as Jim has been dealing with his.
1 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2018 07:30 pm Title: Paper
I love your style of writing so much! Always look forward to updates of this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I’ve really enjoyed writing it.
Date: March 11, 2018 07:03 pm Title: Paper
I love this story so much already. You have a real talent for making them sound close to the actual Jim and Pam which is just lovely. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope to be able to keep them in character as we get into the *real* angsty parts!
1 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2018 07:57 pm Title: Paper
I really enjoy your writing style. It’s so easy to visualize the scene and your characterization is great! Can’t wait to see what you do with the rest of the challenge words :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always worry if I'm writing them OOC so I'm glad to hear that others don't think that! I look forward to tackling the rest of the challenge!
Date: February 21, 2018 12:01 pm Title: Paper
Great writing here. Very believable dialogues with Pam and Jim. Cool concept you have with them being aware of the doc crew, not many people address that in stories.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to read that my interactions with them are in character. That is always my biggest worry-are they OOC? So I'm glad to see that at least one person doesn't think so!