Date: August 22, 2020 08:01 pm Title: Message
"sometimes you're with someone that also fits the description of a labrador but that's just how it is" is a brilliant line. As is Jim's subtle flirting about how the Dundies were a religious experience for him, too.
1 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2018 07:24 am Title: Message
Okay, I have no idea how I started this and then let it get away from me, but I’m catching up and just had to comment on this chapter (because you know how I love a good IM story) and say that you nailed it (are nailing it)!! The IM was spot on in character, and aside from that, the way you have this set up in this little internal dialogue way of writing is just fantastic (that’s for the story as a whole. I’m blabbering. ANYWAY). I can’t wait to finish the rest! Keep up the amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love a good IM story, too, they’re my favorite. I’m so glad you’re enjoying it!
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2018 10:30 am Title: Message
Your character voice are so realistic, so smooth, and so believable. You’ve taken these tiny moments from the show, something as easily overlooked as Dwight’s anime crush (what a fantastic character), and created this bittersweet moment where his fictional obession meets Jim’s feelings in a way that could seem cliche or silly if written by almost anyone else, but instead feels heartwrenching and encapsulates the emotions surrounding Jim and Pam’s friendship throughout the earlier seasons. I like this a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you! I live for that early season angst, so I’m glad to hear that my intentions are coming through in the writing! I appreciate your compliments so much!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2018 09:23 pm Title: Message
So so good! So true to where they both are during that time. I like how you’ve so subtly managed to get from Hot Girl, hit the next few eps, and foreshadow through to The Fire.
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad it reads like how I imagine they felt during the early seasons: confused, mostly, haha. I appreciate you reading and reviewing so much!