1 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2018 12:56 pm Title: Parking Lot
Holy... what a beautiful and heartbreaking chapter! You write both characters so well but I especially love your insight into Jim.
Can we all just hug crying Jim?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I would absolutely LOVE to hug crying Jim—wouldn’t we all? If only.
1 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2018 10:05 am Title: Parking Lot
You hit the nail on the head with this one. Wow. You’re writing these so beautifully. I can wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed them all and I so appreciate all the reviews.
1 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2018 08:05 am Title: Parking Lot
Melting. So well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It might be my favorite chapter that I’ve written so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It might be my favorite chapter that I’ve written so far.
Date: May 25, 2018 09:35 pm Title: Parking Lot
Wow! You capture exactly what was happening and it is . . . wow! This is a great glimpse into Pam's mind and heart and Jim's as well. It's so heavy, and yet not melodramatic. And the way it plays out makes sense. Pam's train of thought follows a logical path, particularly that of "I can't". Beautifully written BT!
Author's Response: Thank you, Clover! That means so much. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!