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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2018 07:34 pm Title: First Day

This was another great chapter! Jim's need to be busy rang really true and I loved his trying to make friends in an almost hostile office with minimal results. You're too good for them, Jim.

Back off, Karen. Back off now.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, Karen, if we could just make her go away that’d be great. Ugh. But conflict makes for a good story and a happy ending, so she has to stay around for a while. Unfortunately.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2018 08:35 pm Title: First Day

I loved the little nuances about Hannah and Tony. Seems appropriate. We never got a taste of what Jim’s first day was, and I think you hit the internals right on the head!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel bad that I left Martin out, haha. I appreciate your reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2018 07:34 pm Title: First Day

A very good look into Jim's head, especially in the time between seasons 2 & 3. I think you captured his feeling of stir craziness very well here. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think stir crazy is a good way to describe how he must have felt. I’m glad it was conveyed well! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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