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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2020 03:17 pm Title: In Which Shopping is Done

The note about Pam basically having invitations pre-prepared is VERY Pam. And I like this description of Angela - if you're going to have them already bonded, feels like you need to offer some context for why Pam would deal with her, uh, less appealing aspects. Also, "a prim and prissy miss" is just a great label for her.

Also appreciated you noting that Roy's unwillingness to spend time with/do things for Pam causes some genuine constraints on her given the social expectations of the time. Not something I had thought about going into this.

Author's Response: Yeah, Roy ignoring her needs makes him even more of an ass here...thanks for the kind words about describing Angela!

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