Date: December 06, 2020 03:30 pm Title: In Which a Conspiracy is Hatched
HA! I love the remix of Ryan and Kelly’s poorly-timed first hookup.
The metaphor of falling in love as being swept out to sea by a riptide is really good – and the line about not being able to stop himself any more than he could breath underwater or fly to the moon just sounds very genre-appropriate. Just high-quality writing here.
You have to hand it to Jim and Pam – putting things in Jell-o seems like it was not so easy in these days.
Author's Response: They really do have to try to get jell-o, yes. Thank you for the kind words about the language!
Date: April 06, 2018 05:41 pm Title: In Which a Conspiracy is Hatched
The pranks in these last two chapters are my favorite part. I love them as co-conspirators in ang time frame, but something about them in this setting is just delightful. Always look forward to your updates!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's fun trying to adapt them into Regency terms, because (for example) staplers weren't invented until the 1860s so no stapler in Jell-o.