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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2020 06:04 pm Title: In Which Jim Throws a Party

This is an interesting twist on Katy’s role in the story – we see her relationship with Jim coming more directly at the expense of Pam’s time with him, and at the same time Roy’s interest in Katy is more than a passing fancy. Certainly a whole new set of burdens of Pam that will be interesting to explore.

You’ve done a good job in this chapter conveying the longing and loneliness that’s so fundamental to Pam at this stage in the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like Hot-Girl-era Pam is best when she is aware of her loneliness a little more.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2018 04:21 pm Title: In Which Jim Throws a Party

This chapter is so sweet in its angst. I love seeing them in this setting.

Author's Response: Oh boy I'm behind on reviews! Thanks for this. The angst really is the heart of the Romance genre and of this part of Jim/Pam so I think they fit together nicely.

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