1 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2018 08:10 pm Title: The One With the East German Laundry Detergent
Sorry it's taken me so long to write a review for this story. It's turning into one of my favorite guilty pleasure stories to dive into. The back and forth banter they have is great as well as their clear love for each other. Very clear descriptions that make it easy to see what they're up to.
Date: June 27, 2018 05:07 pm Title: The One With the East German Laundry Detergent
I just read this new chapter and then went back and caught up the last chapter which I realized I had somehow missed before. And I loved them both so much that I really can't go another minute without telling you how much I love, love, love the way you write Jim and Pam. Everything feels so *true*. You write them sweet and funny and protective and thoughtful of each other, just the way we know them to be and your banter between them is spot on. (And FUNNY. I laughed out loud! 🙊) And you cannot hide in the closet over something this SWEET! Okay sure, also a *tad* naughty, perhaps (🔥🔥🔥), but omg! Just so sweet! d84; I loved it and you made my (otherwise weird and crappy) day, thank you. 🙂 Oh, and I can't wait to read your other stuff too! 😁
Date: June 27, 2018 07:45 am Title: The One With the East German Laundry Detergent
AGIAN MARIE! (I too, like using full names and Marie is a solid middle name for scolding anyone, right?)
I’m not scolding you though. I’m too impressed. How did you manage to write a chapter that was so damn sweet and adorable but at the same time, completely inappropriate in the best of ways? That’s talent.
I was completely entertained by this chapter, especially Jim’s housing and lingerie reviews. And who doesn’t love a solid Friends reference?
Author's Response:
Oddly enough, you guessed my actual middle name on the first try. Oops~
I can’t even answer that question. This entire chapter just kind of manifested into a big ball of sexual fluff that left me very red faced, so I’m glad it worked 😂
Jim’s little reviews were my favorite part to write! And I totally did the Friends thing on purpose. Glad you caught it 😉
Thank ya thank ya!
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2018 10:22 am Title: The One Where Phyllis Can't See Your Hands
I caught up on this and dang, if and when we ever make a follow-up to our Lemon flavored JAM list, this one will definitely be at the top. The IM banter is so good, I always envision Pam being a little more forward (and a little naughtier) when she's sure the cameras and coworkers aren't looking. I want to make it clear though that the jellybean on this review is 100% for the candle reference XD (anyone out there lost on the candle reference look for "Not A Word", I have it linked in our lemon flavored JAM list above ;-) )
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you! I put that candle reference in there on purpose, and it got the exact reaction I was hoping for ;)
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2018 07:46 am Title: The One Where Phyllis Can't See Your Hands
“Maybe candles are involved. Maybe they aren’t.” You’re hilarious. Really.
I love the back and forth, with each of them managing to get the upper hand... so to speak. Sexy times aside, I absolutely love the banter in this chapter.
James Duncan, indeed.
Author's Response:
I two-hundred-percent did that candle thing for you guys ;)
Also, full names are my weakness. James Duncan will more than likely make a reappearance.
1 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2018 10:32 pm Title: The One Where Phyllis Can't See Your Hands
Let’s count what boxes this checks on the list of things I love in fanfic: IM a45;a039; In the office a45;a039; Dirty talk a45;a039; A little sprinkling of public places a45;a039;
You are firing on all cylinders sis and I am HERE FOR IT. Also, I laughed out loud at the mention of the candle. Nice.
Author's Response:
Thank ya, darlin' :)
The candle thing was totally for you guys. I'm glad you all caught it xD
1 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2018 08:22 pm Title: The One With Jim's Tongue
So a thing I've noticed in this fandom is that a lot of people like to make Pam shy and unsure when it comes to this particular activity. What I love most about this chapter is that you went the opposite route. Not only is Pam all for it, but she's barely asking as she's more demanding it. And enthusiastically reciprocating.
Get it, girl. Get it all over that office next time. (Or eventually.)
1 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2018 02:47 pm Title: The One With Jim's Tongue
Oh my.
I mean.
Well.
More, please? I'll love you forever if you write this forever. Sound good? Great, thanks! ;)
Author's Response: Oh, trust me, I’ve got quite the list of prompts to keep this going ;)
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:29 pm Title: The One With Drunk Handsy Beesly
Well, Drunk Handsy Pam is a good time, isn't she? And here I was scandalized by Jim in the last chapter... Pam comes along and takes it up a notch.
I like it. I like it a lot.
Author's Response: Drunk Handsy Pam has a bit of a problem with keeping her hands to herself, but I don’t thjnk jim will mind too much, especially in later chapters... ;)
Date: June 12, 2018 07:23 pm Title: The One Where Pams New Clothes Cause Problems
JIMOTHY! Back alley/parking lot of a bar sexy times is always a gold star from me. Well done!
I also enjoyed the line about nose powder, the girls (and Ryan). Good one.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks, I for sure did that on purpose. The powder line anyway. Jim in a back alley kind of happened on its own... oops
Date: June 12, 2018 07:15 pm Title: The One Where Jim wants to be Monogamous
This is me petitioning you to write a "Jim Halpert's Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend" fic. You know, in your spare time.
Because, as this chapter proves...he's a *really* great boyfriend.
Date: June 12, 2018 07:09 pm Title: The One Where The Movie Wasn't Exciting Enough
There's a line in this one, where Pam is proud of Jim for taking initiative that just kills me. Pam's character throughout this is delightful.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:02 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
You're getting a review for each chapter of this one, so buckle up.
"He had definitely kept his tongue to himself the last time. As he gently sucks yours into his mouth, the sensations have you thinking that, if he hadn’t, you probably wouldn’t have said I can’t." That's my favorite line in this chapter - it's pretty much perfect.
I always love the stories where they decide to take it slow and it backfires. Can't wait to see who wears who down first!
1 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2018 08:31 pm Title: The One With Drunk Handsy Beesly
I mean...I would very happily read 8457 chapters of everything but them actually doin’ it if they were all written like this. You up for it? 😉
Date: June 04, 2018 06:42 am Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
Maximum jellybeans! Tres spicy :D
1 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2018 12:50 am Title: The One With Drunk Handsy Beesly
All the thumbs up in the world 😊😊
1 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2018 07:43 am Title: The One Where Pams New Clothes Cause Problems
Probably a lot more difficult to drive than you think, Jim, if my intuition isn’t off,lol. ;) Either way can’t wait to find out!
1 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2018 09:04 am Title: The One Where Pams New Clothes Cause Problems
Hot hot hot. How they’re going to survive until they get to the main event I don’t know, because I might not. But I sure am excited to see them get there!
1 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2018 06:14 am Title: The One Where Jim wants to be Monogamous
I typically don’t care much for smut for smut sake, I like a story and need some plot in there... that’s just my preference. So I was a little hesitant to read this after the summary even knowing coming from you it’ll be great no matter what. But I’m pleasantly surprised to find a story weaved in there. Quite a fun story too, which again, not a surprise...
1 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2018 09:15 pm Title: The One Where The Movie Wasn't Exciting Enough
I mean, you know how good you are. All I’ll say is that I can’t wait for more.
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2018 07:46 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
3 in-progress fics? You spoil us. So far this seems up to your standards in the others, which is a high compliment indeed. I look forward to where it goes (though perhaps I will not read this one, like the others, at work).