Reviews For Five Random Haikus
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Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooo, I love #4 and #5.  I really enjoy poetry so this is fun to read! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Morning Angel! So fun to write as well!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2006 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was deep.  Really enjoyed it. I sure hope something changed.

Author's Response: I'm sure it did/will eventually! Thanks kaystar!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Par5, I know you did this as a one off, but I have to tell you - I'm impressed!  I love the first two in particular.  (And I'm glad I didn't start drinking early and write a haiku about the forearms, because believe me, it'd have been a disaster!)

Seriously - this is awesome.

Author's Response: I hope the one I wrote for you will forever remind you of JK/JH and his lovely forearms. It's not the least bit subtle, but neither is our love of JK/JH. I like to think the second one sums up the last 5 months of my life! Thanks for inspiring me to write haiku again-it was fun!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very creative! And fun. You got a lot of good stuff in such a limited structure. And I love the last line - we'll find out soon, I hope!

Author's Response: Thanks Semby!

Reviewer: Spamster Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved the very last sentence Did anything change?  For som reason, it struck me in a way that only Dylan Thomas and TS Eliot are capable of doing.  Until now.  Great job.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Spamster, I am truly flattered.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice work, Par5! I especially like #s 2 and 5.

Author's Response: Thanks shan! I love haiku. It's like instant gratification!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love poetry. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad because I have a ways to go to make up for all the joy your fics have given me! Thank you!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Question: How can you go wrong when you start with JH/JK forearms?

Answer:  You can't.  Great idea - hope you don't mind I ran with it, too.   

I really love reading your work! 


Author's Response: There you are Moxie! I thought it was kinda quiet around here! I love that you hitched onto my wagon, so to speak. This all just smacks of "So I Married an Axe Murderer" and I love it! Thanks for being you!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. These are graceful and profound. Here I was thinking that my fic was efficient...

Author's Response: Thanks Lis! I love your succinct prose but it helps me when the law according to the rules is only 17 syllables! Otherwise, you know how I like to go on and on.

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1

My goodness, those forearms are indeed worthy of poetry. Hard to pick which I like best...third and fourth are especially tasty. And, for what it's worth...I think something will change - or I may have to personally grab Pam by the collar and explain a couple of things to her (in fanfic of course!) These are really fun, you clever girl!

Author's Response: Oh, I totally want them to change too, Colette. And hopefully will be adding new HAPPY ones when there are more delicious Jam moments! Thanks for encouraging my bad behavior!

Reviewer: sharky Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2006 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1

You wrote a set of haikus? That's brilliant!

Author's Response:

I just changed the title to more accurately reflect what you get when you click. Thanks sharky. And thanks for finally posting yours!

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