1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2019 04:29 am Title: June 10: At the Hospital
Hi! So, I finally landed here! Loving it so far. I haven't reviewed the other two chapters because I was too into the story. I love how at first Larissa calls Pam "Anderson". Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi! Glad to have you! I appreciate your noticing that point; I had fun putting it in.
1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2018 11:44 am Title: June 10: At the Hospital
I’m so excited to see where this goes! I love Larissa’s characterization so far and the internal struggle that Pam had with trying to call Jim—that’s something I think she would have done a hundred times over that summer. Can’t wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to keep the updates flowing.
1 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2018 03:01 pm Title: June 10: At the Hospital
I feel just awful, I only just discovered this today! I’ve been doing heavy research on a massive project for our Instagram account that is kept me away from the recent section for a while now and you’ve managed to put three chapters without me knowing... what the heck! (And Twitter still isn’t working!) Sorry, bit of a rant there in my review...
Anyway I’m a sucker for this type of story, always, I could read a million of them and they’ll never get old and you are off to a great start. That first chapter almost felt like I was in her mind and I think you captured the jumbled mess that was her head quite well. And I’m so glad you made the choice to have jims other family and friends (in)conveniently away, I’m really looking forward to Larissa and Pam getting to know each other a little better.
Author's Response: No reason to feel awful! I'm very glad you're coming along with me for this ride now (and I'm excited about a "massive project" for Instagram). Let me know how you feel about the Larissa/Pam dynamics as we keep going.
Date: May 22, 2018 11:48 pm Title: June 10: At the Hospital
This is so well done. I always enjoy getting to know Larissa. It is satisfying to avoid the pain and devastation that the transfer to Stamford caused both of them. But now the suspense is thick with what is to come. You've got me! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm looking forward to building up Larissa a bit more as a character, so it may be a little before we get Jim's perspective on that transfer, but I will get there, I promise.