1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2018 08:38 am Title: June 10: Still in Jim's Room
Really fantastic chapter. I think you hit Larissa’s assessment of her own opinion of Pam on the head. Great stuff and nice ending with shared interests.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed writing that one, so this is nice to ear.
Date: May 28, 2018 01:22 pm Title: June 10: Still in Jim's Room
Finally got caught up on this and it keeps getting better and better! I love how you had Pam describe herself and Larissa is definitely growing on me. I laughed when she admitted that everyone who knows Jim knew about his feelings for Pam before Pam did, and I loved her just coming out and saying that she already likes Pam. This friendship feels natural, despite the circumstances they're in.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you caught up, and I'm very glad Larissa is growing on you. It's a hard line to walk between too much bonding and too much ignoring Jim, so I'm glad it's working for you.
1 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2018 05:40 pm Title: June 10: Still in Jim's Room
These last two chapters, where Pam described herself and then Larissa describes Jim, are just so beautiful. I’ve never heard someone describe the way they see the world the way that Pam does, and i think it’s so fitting of her. And I love getting to see more of Larissa and have her fleshed out as a character. Head canon on Larissa Halpert thanks to Comfect officially accepted. Great great great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've been really worried about the characterization in these chapters, so this is good to hear.