Date: November 27, 2020 04:59 pm Title: Interlude: In Jim's Head
These quick impressions are a wonderful way to convey Jim's current status. I took as long to read and savor each tidbit as I would a 78 word paragraph trying to describe it. Not everything has to conform to paragraph narrative.
Sometimes less IS more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was hard to write those, so I'm glad they worked for you!
Date: June 22, 2018 05:14 pm Title: Interlude: In Jim's Head
whoa...
Author's Response: Trippy, right?
Date: May 31, 2018 05:14 pm Title: Interlude: In Jim's Head
Oooh this chapter gave me chills. I appreciate that you didn’t give him an inner monologue or make it si that he’s aware of Pam being there. I love it. On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! He will definitely develop something more like an inner monologue or dreams next time we drop in on him, but I definitely wanted to convey that while he's not dead he's definitely very out of it.
Date: May 29, 2018 09:15 pm Title: Interlude: In Jim's Head
Okay, I'm just hyperventilating a tiny bit. Wake up Jim!
Author's Response: He will soon! Although these recoveries are often slow...