Date: June 16, 2018 10:55 pm Title: June 11: The Hallway
I really loved the interaction between Jim and Larissa. I’ve been waiting for that since the story started! I think they have a believable older brother/younger sister relationship with just enough ribbing mixed with just enough emotion so that neither one is over the top. And I like Pam’s explanation for the reasons that she broke up with Roy. I do believe she still cared about him and wanted him to do well, and that gets pushed aside in a lot of fic. So great job! As always, can’t wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was somewhat concerned that both of those weren't going to read well, so that is a big relief.
Date: June 16, 2018 01:59 pm Title: June 11: The Hallway
Good on Pam getting her feelings and thoughts out into the open like that. It's one thing to think about deep thoughts, it's another to verbalize them and hear oneself say them out loud. Looking forward to more as always.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think this version of Pam has had the kind of revelatory experience that makes you find those words.
Date: June 16, 2018 11:39 am Title: June 11: The Hallway
Ahhhh what a wonderful update!
Date: June 16, 2018 11:39 am Title: June 11: The Hallway
Ahhhh what a wonderful update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Doubly ;)