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Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2018 03:16 pm Title: June 12: Towards the Hospital

Number one: are you a mind reader? Because Pam and mine’s Waffle House orders are the exact same and I don’t know anybody down here who does liked diced! That made me so excited. And two: I am so excited to meet Pam’s mom, as well as have the two of them spend some time together movie watching! I just enjoy this so much. It’s sweet and believable and i always love the updates. Can’t wait for the next one.

Author's Response: I just went with my gut on Pam's order, so I guess I think you're Pam? High praise if so. And thank you so much for your kind words! Let me know what you think of Helene once she shows up.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2018 10:50 pm Title: June 12: Towards the Hospital

I do like Pam's mom in this chapter. Just kind of steamrolling her way through Pam's objections. Made it fun to read.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to distinguish how the characters talk a little more, and I think Pam's mom knowing how Pam is and just blowing by her objections seems reasonable as a character choice for her.

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2018 11:37 am Title: June 12: Towards the Hospital

“I know dear, that’s why I didn’t invite your father.”

I love that now things are a little less grim with Jim, they’re all relaxing a little bit and things are a bit lighter. I also love Pam’s mom and I’m anxiously awaiting her appearance at the hospital.

Author's Response: We will definitely get to Mrs. Beesly soon! Thanks for reading; despite today's slight medical setback they'll be more relaxed going forward too.

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