Date: June 24, 2018 07:13 pm Title: June 12: By Jim's Bed
“I promise, you won’t misinterpret this” had me grinning like a fool. That was a perfect line. Thankfully followed by a sweet kiss. Things are moving along!
And here comes Mama Beesly. I’m excited.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was pretty proud of that one, I'll admit. So much angst to make up for makes for so many good lines to include.
Date: June 24, 2018 08:25 am Title: June 12: By Jim's Bed
Very nice. It's great fun to see how Jim and Pam are progressing through this. I really enjoyed Pam's internal thoughts through this one. They're such a sweet couple.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to keep up the internal monologues without entirely losing the forward thrust of the plot; this last update has four people's internal monologues to bridge Helene's entrance, but going forward it will probably be more like the one you just commented on here, with one person's at a time. And I'm glad you like my JAM couple.
Date: June 23, 2018 05:03 pm Title: June 12: By Jim's Bed
OMG someone else who also thinks there were two kisses on Casino Night!
Author's Response: Right!?! I like to think of them as different kisses--and there's a venerable history on the archive of people treating them as two, so I decided to lean into it.