Date: July 11, 2023 04:00 pm Title: First Meeting
AWWW!!! How sweet and well put together, I am roughly their age and this brought me right back to my own high school.
More more!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It was a lot of fun envisioning them at that age. There's a lot more in this story so I hope you enjoy the rest too. Thanks for the review.
Date: February 22, 2023 09:51 am Title: First Meeting
I know I’m late, but this has to be one of my fav I’ve ever read! This is so sweet, I love the use of their names too!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I'm glad you like it and also took the time to leave a comment. I remember having a lot of fun creating this story so I'm thrilled to hear others like it so much too.
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2023 09:42 am Title: First Meeting
Love this!! What a sweet meeting. They are still in character, it feels like they are destined no matter how they would meet. d84;
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're here for this one. And yes, soulmates like Jim and Pam would always be destined to be together.
1 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2022 08:28 pm Title: First Meeting
Star Fox at the beginning was fun :)
Bless Jim for being so hung up on Pam already!
And funny how they’ve both changed their names at the same time
Author's Response: Star Fox 64 is still a favorite game of mine. Yup they change their names at the same time. Could it be they're meant for each other?
1 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2022 03:07 pm Title: First Meeting
I couldn’t help myself, I just had to start it. Already off to a super cute start. Jamie and Morgan both seem adorable. Just wish the hockey date wasn’t happening!
Author's Response: Welcome to this one too. This one is canon compliant so expect some angst here and there. But it's also a lot of fun. Looking forward to your thoughts here too.
1 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2021 08:24 pm Title: First Meeting
My bookshelf is full and I've got four of my own stories in the works but I've been anticipating starting this one for so long and since there hasn't been a new Chapter of SW in a while (no pressure - none at all - take your time by all means ((hope you can read my levity)) ) and I miss reading me a little Warrior style writing so I finally dove in.
Right off the bat (I know wrong sport) this fic is delightful. Interesting twist with the names - wondering if there is some significance later since we already know it is Jim and Pam. I like how you made it so she really hasn't seen him - although I was surprised how much interaction they already are having with the chat room - oh and how I remember chat rooms like that - funny how even though we don't have to wait for the Pshhhhhhhkkkkkrrrrkakingkakingkakingtchotchotchochhhhchhhh*ding to connect any longer we still love our chat rooms (only now we call it Discord).
I got really swept up in the scene with the coach and the wind sprints and Code of Contact.
Never, for one instant, forget that the name on the front of your jersey is more important than the one on the back!" This was my favorite of the mantras.
Nice to see the Jim qualities we admire were there even from high school - honor and leadership - and that his goofy brothers were also the same - funny though how they reminded me of Fred and George a bit here. And you know how I love a good jixing - but in this case ugh had it not been for it she might not have ever dated Roy, that hurts. (JK)
Looking forward to getting into this one.
Author's Response: Glad to have you here for this one. Ah 90's era internet, such a wonderful state of ignorant bliss we lived in back then. I also really liked the wind spring and code of conduct scene. I bascially took the wind sprints and that quote from the movie "Miracle" about the 1980 US Olympic Hockey team. Great movie.
Hope you were paying attention in this chapter. ;)
Looking forward to hearing the rest of your thoughts on this one.
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 07:13 pm Title: First Meeting
A really interesting start to this one! You start with something like an anti-meet cute – she can’t see, they get stink bombed, and he immediately has to run. It’s almost more of a missed opportunity than it is a prior meeting. And then we go right into her first date with Roy – and I really enjoy that this ended up being jinx-related. (Though the fact that Roy enjoys a Pam who can’t speak for herself just feels… troublingly accurate.)
I’m interested to see how you’ll explore the theme being introduced here – that you learn from your mistakes or you repeat them. Certainly it’s something you can pretty cleanly apply to canon in all sorts of ways.
This chapter gave me all sorts of horrible 90s flashbacks, down to the chatroom… where all of a sudden you turn an anti-meet cute into a regular meet-cute! A really nice touch.
Author's Response: Well hello new reviews to this story! Glad you liked how things got set up. I hope you were paying attention to this chapter. There's lots of things that will come back around, and in that regard I'm pretty proud of it. Sorry not sorry about the 90's flashbacks. I remember the 90's as being a great time. Looking forward to what you think going forward.
Date: March 05, 2019 07:33 pm Title: First Meeting
What a fun chapter! And the Big Reveal has finally happened! So fun! And I recognized almost all of the songs. Now I'm sad that it will wrap up soon. Congrats Warrior on being #2. This HAS been a real marathon, full of so many great stories. Thank you so much! Looking forward to the finale. So great! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. It was a lot of fun to write and create all these things for Jim to find. Thank you for all the great feedback as well.
Date: March 05, 2019 12:40 pm Title: First Meeting
Wow! First of all, I couldn't belive the word count. Kudos on that! It takes a lot of commitment.
I really liked the premise of the chapter, to send Jim on a scavenger hunt. Just the thing he would enjoy and such a nice way for Pam to say what she knows.
The songs are a very nice touch to every part of the journey.
Author's Response: Thanks. Time and words fly when you're having fun. Sending Jim on the scavenger hunt was something I'd been planning for a long time. I'm glad it turned out well. I've had all those songs on a Youtube playlist for months. It's been the main thing I've listened to while I was writing this story so I'm glad all the songs came across well.
Date: January 25, 2019 03:36 pm Title: First Meeting
This is great. I like that Jim's family got involved and took care of him. I'm also glad that he realized his mistake in shredding the letter, even though he didnt get it back. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. The way I see it, this is just first in a long line of mistakes Jim makes throughout Season 3. Writing angst like this isn't my most favorite thing to do. Glad you liked it though.
1 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2019 09:40 am Title: First Meeting
This is a very nice start! I like travelling down memory lane on the whole chatroom and windows 95 thing, nice touch!
Author's Response: Thank you. It was fun revisiting those things from the early days of the internet too. Ah the 90's, what a great time it was. Hope to hear more from you.
Date: August 21, 2018 08:15 pm Title: First Meeting
Delightful. I like your Penny. She's a good egg. I am forbidden from further jellybeans so I will just say I am very much enjoying it.
Author's Response: I'm going to assume this review was meant for the chapter "The New Jamie" rather than the first chapter of this story as it says on my screen. Thank you. It's my intent that Penny will be a good influence on Pam. Thanks for the review.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:32 pm Title: First Meeting
Okay, I'm into this. I'm super curious to find out how Jamie and Morgan transform into Jim and Pam. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you. Like my story description says, it's going to be a journey. I hope to do both the characters of both Jim and Pam justice regardless of what ups and downs may come. Thanks for the support.
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2018 10:08 am Title: First Meeting
Oh yay! I love HS Jam fic! This first chapter was excellent, I’m definitely hooked already!
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as well.
1 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2018 01:55 am Title: First Meeting
Really nice first chapter! I've never been into high school fics with them but I really like this one so far. I love adorkable teenage Pam!
I'm really looking forward to see where you go with this story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. There was actually a lot of research that went into this chapter. From not only what we know from cannon, but of the actual high schools themselves. Also getting the timeline to match up to the start of the show took some research as well to make sure I've got everything in place. Glad you liked this first chapter.
Date: June 10, 2018 12:58 am Title: First Meeting
Hmmmm very interesting! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm looking forward to writing more!
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2018 08:59 pm Title: First Meeting
Oh yay! I love young Jim/Pam stories! I can’t wait to see where you take this! And how we get from Morgan to potentially Pam ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. It'll be fun to see where this goes for sure.
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2018 06:39 pm Title: First Meeting
Nice start. I love fics where they meet in HS. I have to admit, I'll read it no matter what but I'm kind of hoping this version of Pam/Morgan doesn't date Roy for a decade given this start.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'd love to tell you my plan, but what fun would that be? Thanks for the support as well.