Date: October 04, 2018 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Andy drinks lemon Smirnoff Ice. Of course he does!
"She returned his stare, raising her beer to her mouth without breaking eye contact. She took a long drink, and his eyes flickered down to her lips." I. Love. This. Pam.
It's really fun to see everyone else as college kids, and Kelly and Meredith are both trips and perfectly in character. The less said about Karen the better.
Jim's so right - tequila is no one's friend. Ever.
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2018 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
"Horrified, she'd said no without even thinking." Well, that settles it. College!Pam is my favorite. She didn't get engaged to Roy! Love that.
And she thinks Jim's cute. Don't we all, though?
Date: October 04, 2018 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm dying. They're so cute. Even when they're talking about Dwight, they're adorable. An off-campus college part, you say? I can't wait!
Date: October 04, 2018 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, Pam really likes Jim already, huh? I love that. Usually he's the first one to get all flustered and dopey over Pam, but she's kind of one up on him so far and it's great.
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2018 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's time, WYW. I'm finally here to read this story and I'm not going to lie, I've really been looking forward to it!
Sorry not sorry for the onslaught of reviews you're about to get in a row.
What an absolutely charming meet-cute! I love a good college AU and I already love this one. Young Jim and Pam are adorable and I can't wait to see what happens next!
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2018 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
Congratulations on the big news! Lots of big changes for you right now. Really great chapter. I felt so sorry for Jim at the beginning, but it looks like it all worked out for him. :) And that part where Pam says "friction" I can hear her saying it with that mix of embarrassment and bluntness that she manages to pull off on the show. Well done!
Date: October 03, 2018 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
First of all, congratulation on your pregnancy!!! I can’t believe you’re going through all these great changes in your life and you still found time to endulce us with more of this great story. I’m totally hooked and I really can’t wait to read more.
And I know you’re really busy, but I’m selfishly hoping you come up with tons and tons of new chapters. Congratulations again!
Date: October 03, 2018 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I like the combination of innocence and sexy.
Date: October 03, 2018 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well worth the wait considering everything you've got going on. Congrats by the way.
So this was just all sorts of sweet and adorable. You've really got them paired nicely in this story and it's a lot of fun to see. Good description that makes it easy to see the scene in the minds eye. The dialogue feels natural as well. Looking forward to more as always.
1 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2018 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
This is so good, I love it so much!
I saw your news in the shoutbox, so congratulations! And take your time continuing.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! We are super excited/terrified haha . I have the next chapter just barely started, hopefully once the craziness of moving dies down I can knock it out and post :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2018 05:15 am Title: Chapter 12
Jim is such an adorable drunk, I thoroughly enjoyed that! And I’m still loving what you’re doing with Dwight and Pam and can’t wait to see how that progresses throughout the story.
That little “love you” at the end was so sweet d84;a039;I’m a sucker for when that just slips out. That’s pretty much how it happened when I told my husband I loved him for the first time. Iwas running late for work and he was dropping me off, I leaned over and gave him a quick kiss, apparently said love you, jumped out of the car and was in the building by the time I realize what I had said.
Date: September 17, 2018 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Such sweetness from both of them. Love all the authentic vignettes borrowed from the show and inserted into this story. So very perfect! Keep up the great work.
Date: September 17, 2018 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love Drunk Jim! Such a goofball. And I like that Karen isn’t a complete bitch. Don’t get me wrong, I like fics where she is a straight up freak show, but I also like this. This seems to fit her character on the show a little better. Especially with the end of her story on the show (married, pregnant, and genuinely happy for Jim and Pam). Keep it up!
Date: September 17, 2018 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This just keeps getting better!
Date: September 17, 2018 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
"In Vino Veritas", in wine (or in this case beer and jello shots) truth. Good on Pam for not pressing anything further in a compromising situation. Lots of fun.
Date: September 17, 2018 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter!! I hope we get to read the akwardness and fluffiness of the morning after. Hope you post the next chapter soon!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2018 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
Agh! WYW, I have been slowly (so slowly) writing a college AU but I gladly derailed myself to read this beauty. I'm SO glad you continued and with my favorite holiday, Halloween! Drunk Jim, Sleepy Jim, Chatty Jim, Handsy Jim, aye aye aye! You are so great at writing Dwight in this story; I applaud how you've captured his tone, his relationship with Angela and his growing friendship with Pam (my fave!). I look forward to where you are going to take these two lovebirds! :)
Author's Response:
That’s exactly what I do when I’m writing slow and need a breather! Ha!
im so glad you’re enjoying. This chapter really fought me, and I’m still not totally happy with it, but Drunk Handsy Chatty Sleepy Jim is such a joy to write (and imagine 😉) that it’s all worth it.
Also, thank you for recognizing my work with Dwight lolol. He is not easy to write sometimes but it’s awesome to hear I’m doing him some justice!
Xoxoxoxo ♥a039;
Date: September 15, 2018 10:20 am Title: Chapter 11
Oooh!! More please
Author's Response: Halloween chapter in the works now! I’m getting ready to move in less than 2 weeks so it’s slow going haha. Thank you for the encouragement tho :)
Date: September 15, 2018 05:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh next chapter should be good fun. Very nice to see their relationship progress like this. They're great together and the scene where they figured out they're BF/GF was very cute. Very Jim and Pam to only realize something rather than actually talk it out, but this time in a good way.
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2018 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
DON'T YOU DARE WRAP IT UP HERE. Sorry for shouting but please, don't do that to me. I would personally say time jump to Halloween, let the "pelvis stuff" happen (Halloween is always great for that kind of thing), and then do the jump to Christmas with the parents and the fluff.
It's sad to say but the best part of my day the last couple of days has been surrounding myself in your fluff, so yeah, I want this to continue until I die.
Also, here, have a jellybean.
Love the lack of angst, love the fluff, love the story.
Author's Response:
“Pelvis stuff” 😂 oh my god that cracked me up. Don’t worry, there will be more pelvis stuff ;D just a little at a time, though!
Halloween chapter is in the works now! I’m so glad you’re enjoying reading along :) thank you so much for the feedback!
Date: September 14, 2018 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story - don't stop now!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will definitely keep it going for as long as I can muster!
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2018 04:46 am Title: Chapter 10
I absolutely love what you did with Dwight here! Specifically Dwight and Pam, I love their friendship explored and the way you created a little something there was amazing!
You absolutely should not end this now, there are so many little relationship moments we need to see yet... first time they call each other bf/gf, first time out as a couple, meeting family, first time!... and then Karen also seemed like an issue/nonissue to deal with. And if you’re able to find conflict that isn’t of the love triangle variety that could be good.
Also the holidays are always fun Halloween, Christmas, valentines and then summer break and summer holidays.
Of course it’s always up to you but I’m definitely interested in more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I’ve always been a huge fan of their friendship in the show so it made sense to create it here too!
Yeah ive been thinking hard on how to incorporate Karen. I really like when she and Pam end up friends, so I might try to do that, I have an idea that could work!
Halloween will probably be my next main thing, since we’re already set in mid-October! After that, I’ll just see where the story takes me :)
I’m unbelievably thankful for your feedback and support! It means so much to know that people are enjoying this as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it :)
Date: September 13, 2018 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Don't you dare wrap it up! This is adorable and delicious and sweet and thrilling. All my favorite stuff! PUHLEASE keep going! Love these two!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it :) <3
Date: September 13, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Don’t wrap it up just yet. These two need more cute and awkward getting-to-know-each-other moments. And I love Halloween. It’d be great to include that
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback and for following along with me :) I’ve never written such a long fic before, it’s an adventure!
1 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2018 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
There most assuredly needs to be a Halloween chapter. Going out trick-or-treating as a Freshman in college was the best. Especially when some of the houses we visited were out profs.
Author's Response: Oh that would be fun! And a good way to get more of our supporting characters in the mix. Jan, David Wallace, Phyllis, Creed...who knows!