Date: November 02, 2018 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim the Sim! Cute! I like the little throwbacks you put in there to the series but keeping it AU.
And you portrayed Andy just as he would be at a college party, I think. :)
Author's Response: Thanks DC! :)
Date: October 31, 2018 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I so love College Jim and Pam! This is such a cute start! I can actually see Jim dressed as a Sim and I kind of wish it had happened in real life. I do hope you decide to continue, we need to know what happens out on the porch!
Author's Response: Thanks Coley! I love College Jim and Pam, and now that I am in college I can start writing College AUs which are my favorite! I really do want to keep going, but it all depends on time and inspiration, who knows when those two things will coincide ¯_(ツ)_/¯. Thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Date: October 30, 2018 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Short cute and sweet. I like how Jim and Pam just naturally gravitate to each other. Pam in a poodle skirt and Jim the Sim is a really cute idea.
A few editing things to watch out for. Proper nouns needing capitilzation like Halloween and Sims. Start of sentences needing capitilzation as well. A good strategy I use is that when I finish writing a chapter I don't post it right away. I'll leave it alone then come back to it. I catch a lot of things like that.
Still this was fun.
Thanks W4, I can always count on you :). I usually try to leave it and read it again later, but I am running out of time (argh) with homework and other life things (also I am exhausted) . I think I fixed them all. My friend plays soo much Sims that's where I got the idea, and I was trying to think of costumes that Pam could wear her iconic white Keds with. Thanks for reading and reviewing <3. See you in the next chat