Date: December 30, 2018 04:32 pm Title: Peppermint
Lots of romantic tension all through this. Considering it's a season 2 fic it's appropriate of course. Excellent descriptions and all the characters were on point. Very nicely written.
Author's Response: I wanted a few additional character interactions without overwhelming the Jim and Pam dynamic, so it’s relieving to head that everyone seemed sufficiently in character. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 30, 2018 10:50 am Title: Peppermint
Oooo girl. I never knew how poetic your writing was. That was cute and angsts and pepperminty all at once.
(It also made me highly rethink the fact that I made my 10 year old students play this at our Christmas party, but like, whatever).
My writing always seems to take on this natural rhythm, so I’m glad to hear that it translates well from my head to paper.
I played this for the first time at a school event, so rest assured that it’s teachers such as yourself that led me to writing this.